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------------Example of Short Meeting or Event-----------
------------------------By--Lestselina-------------------------

[Scene] While running down the hall to try and find her first class, (Girl) overhears someone speaking rather loudly in an empty classroom or something. Curious, she peeks in.

Sora: (Here you could insert a line with fumbled words and accents (you could accent by CAPS I’m sure to overemphasize) )
{Girl}: (Choose)
- (Positive): <clap> That was amazing!
- (Negative): I DO hope you aren’t actually planning on doing that in public.
- Was that for a class?
Sora: (Reactions)
- (Positive): <blush, scratch back of head in modesty> Thanks! I’m practicing for the play.
- (Negative): I am actually. I just got the script, but I’m doing to do it for the school play!
- No, it’s for the school play. I was just practicing before class started.
{Girl}: (Continued Reactions)
- (Positive): That sounds cool. Aren’t you supposed to be in class though? The bell already rang.
- (Negative): <Thought: Oh boy, this one’s pretty clueless...> You do know that the bell rang already, right?
- But class has started!
Sora: It HAS?!?! But aren’t you late too?
{Girl}: Yes, but I can’t find my class. I have English.
Sora: Me too! Come on, I’ll take you! My name is Sora by the way.
{Girl}: I’m {name}.
Sora: All right, let’s go. Hopefully the teacher will excuse us because you’re new.
{Girl}: Sure, use the new girl as a late pass!
Sora: <laugh>

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------------Example of Long Event------------------------
---------------------By Genisis34 --------------------------


Event: chance to date Sora.

*Another day at school. The teacher is passing back their math tests and Sora bangs his head on the table once he gets his. You peek over and see that he got a D. *

Kairi: Sora, what’s the matter? What did you get?

You:
1.)Yea, Sora, what did you get?
2.)Kairi, shhhh!
3.)He’s got a D

If you took option 1:
Sora: *blushes* I got… I got a D ok?
Teacher: Sora! Please be quiet! We are still in class after all!
Kairi: ooo, Sora you got yelled at!
Sora: *blushes harder*

If you took option 2
Teacher: (name), please stop disrupting my class if you keep this up you’ll end up with a detention! *walks away*
Sora: thanks *passes note to you* note says: meet me after school ~Sora

If you chose option 3
Sora: wha--- WHY ARE YOU LOOKING ON MY PAPER?!
Kairi and you: *giggling*
Teacher: You three! Detention!
All: aww!
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Continued off of option 1:

You’re walking home and you see Sora leaning against a tree.

Sora: Hey I waited for you
You:
1.)Is that right?
2.)I hafta get home. We’ll talk at school tomorrow, k?

If you took option 1
Sora: Yea, listen. You got me in trouble today so I think you owe me.
You: Like what?
Sora: Meet me outside room 4H tomorrow.
You:
1.)Look Sora, I’m kinda busy this week maybe some other time.*walks away*
2.)Umm, alright fine. See You tomorrow *walks away*

If you took option 2
Sora: Oh alright fine. But you still owe me.
You: *walks away* Later, Sora!
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Continued off of option 2

You: *you’re sitting watching the sunset, looking over the residential part of the island and beyond* (were Kairi was talking to Stephanie in kh2)
Sora: Hey.
You: Hi. Isn’t the sunset beautiful today? Anyway, what’s with the note?
Sora: Yea *blushes a little* well I just wanted to thank you for shutting Kairi up. So you saw what I got?
You: Yea sorry about that I couldn’t help but look…
Sora: It’s ok. But I owe you so meet me outside room 4H tomorrow.
You:
1.) Look Sora, I’m kinda busy this week maybe some other time.*walks away*
2.) Umm, alright fine. See you tomorrow *walks away*

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Continued off of option 3

*You Sora and Kairi come out of detention looking a bit grumpy and bored. Sora heads straight for his house with out talking to anyone*

Kairi: detention was a drag. I’ll see you later
You: alright bye, Kairi

*You’re walking home and you see Sora leaning against a tree.*

Sora: Hey I waited for you
You:
1.) Is that right?
2.) I hafta get home. We’ll talk at school tomorrow, k?

If you took option 1
Sora: Yea, listen. You got me in trouble today so I think you owe me.
You: Like what?
Sora: Meet me outside room 4H tomorrow.
You:
1.) Look Sora, I’m kinda busy this week maybe some other time.*walks away*
2.) Umm, alright fine. See you tomorrow *walks away*

If you took option 2 (from: Sora: I waited for you.)
Sora: Oh alright fine. But you still owe me.
You: *walks away* Later, Sora!

If you agreed to meet Sora:

*You walk up to room 4H and you see sora holding something behind his back. He spots you and says:*

Sora: Hey, you made it!
You:
1.) Yea but my parents are going to kill me when I don’t come home right away
2.) Yeah, yeah sure whatever. What did you want me to come here for?

If you chose option 1:
Sora: Well, don’t worry about that

If you chose option 2
Sora: Hahaha in a rush are you?

After Sora’s line (from option 1 or 2):
*Sora holds out a plushie toy and hands it to you*
Sora: I work at Mog’s so I decided to get that for you
You: Aww, that’s so sweet!
Sora: Alright that’s it. Do you want me to walk you home?
You:
1.)That would be cool, thanks *walks with Sora, talking*
2.)Uhh. Thanks for the plushie but I think I can walk home by myself.

If you chose option 2
Sora: Alright then ^^ I’ll see you tomorrow (name) *waves goodbye*






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------------Example of Long Date Event------------------
---------------------By OP-KH-DS--------------------------

*riku and her are walking through the town*
a) ooooo plushies, let's go there! XD
b) Look at that sunset...
c) Hey, we should go shopping together

(I’ll add in dialogue later)

Riku: Actually I'm kinda hungery... let's get something to eat.

*they sit down to eat but riku appears to be silent*


Riku: ...
Player: ...

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Option a.) You okay?
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Riku: hm? ...uh yeah... I'm fine. (honestly)
Player... (confused)

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i) You can be honest with me. (0 points for date)
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Riku: huh... I am being honest. I'm fine...
Riku: Just because I don't say anything doesn't mean something's wrong. (little ticked off)
Riku: ...just because I'm quiet doesn't mean I'm not enjoying myself....
Riku: .....
Player: I.. uh... I didn't mean...
Riku: I got a chemistry project I gotta work on. So I'll see ya later.
*End Date*

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ii) Are you bored? ( 2 points for date)
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Riku: Ah! ah, no, no! (flustered)
Riku: I'm haivng a great time... (bashful smile)
Riku: I'm sorry....
Player: For what?
Riku: ... I ....don't always know what to say.
Riku: ...
Riku: There was a time when I was alone for a long time... It's not that way anymore... but I guess I can't escape from it. It was my own doing. I don't have anyone to blame but myself. But it's like... there's this life everyone has that I don't. There are memories and experinces you have that I missed. Everyone has all these stories and history... but my life's an empty slate. I can't begin to speak... when it's a life I'm without.
Riku: I'm sorry... that's the way I am... I don't know if that will ever change.
Player: Well, we can start making memories then! (riku looks at you). Then you'll have lots of stories and memories to talk about. We'll make them together.
Riku: ... ah (blush)
Riku: Yeah, we can create memories together... (soft smile, blush)
Player: Yeah ^_^
Riku: ...for some reason... I'm more open around you. (soft smile) Haha, maybe I'm just losing it... (half smile, closed eyes or looking away) but I don't feel so uneasy with you around. (genuine smile)
Player: .... (blush)
Riku: It's getting late, let me take you home
*sence change to player's house*
Player: Thanks riku, I'll see ya at school.
Riku: See ya.
*End Date*


(a little too articulate of the heart for a 15 year old guy lol)

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iii) Why are you so quiet? (2 points for date)
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Riku: why? (blush)
Riku: Sorry, I'm not really good company. You must be bored. (looks the other way sadly)
Player: No, I really like hanging out with you. You're quiet, I always wondered why that is...
Riku:... (blush)
Riku: I ... don't always know what to say...
Riku: ...
Riku: There was a time when I was alone for a long time... It's not that way anymore... but I guess I can't escape from it. It was my own doing. I don't have anyone to blame but myself. But it's like... there's this life everyone has that I don't. There are memories and experinces you have that I missed. Everyone has all these stories and history... but my life's an empty slate. I can't begin to speak... when it's a life I'm without.
Riku: I... I probably said too much... this is the way I am and that may never change...
Player: Well, we can start making memories then! (riku looks at you). Then you'll have lots of stories and memories to talk about. We'll make them together.
Riku: ... ah (blush)
Riku: Yeah, we can create memories together... (soft smile, blush)
Player: Yeah ^_^
Riku: ...for some reason... I'm more open around you. (soft smile) Haha, maybe I'm just losing it... (half smile, closed eyes or looking away) but I don't feel so uneasy with you around. (genuine smile)
Player: .... (blush)
Riku: It's getting late, let me take you home
*sence change to player's house*
Player: Thanks riku, I'll see ya at school.
Riku: See ya.
*End Date*

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Option b.) There's a cute shop over there. (1 point for date)
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Riku: Ah... that came out of nowhere haha.
Player: Maybe~ but it doesn't change it's a cute shop!
Player: Take me there please~~~ >.<
Riku: Hahaha, alright, alright. Whatever will I do with you. Can't you behave?
Player: I can... If you buy me something :3
Riku: o.O Somehow I don't believe you.. haha... just know you're robbing me of my lunch money.
Player: Yay~~
Riku: You're cheering about robbering me of lunch??
Player: hehehe ;3
Riku:.... (soft smile and stares)
Player: What?
Riku: Oh... nothing (smile)
*sence change to player's house*
Player: Thanks riku, I'll see ya at school.
Riku: See ya.
*End Date*
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Option c.) Tell me something about yourself. (-1 point for date)
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Riku: ...like what?
Player: .....
Player: ....like what do you do, when you're home.
Riku: ....
Riku: ... I hardly live an exciting life. There really isn't anything to say.
Player: ...surely there's something?
Riku: .....
Riku: .... I really gotta get going. I have a chemistry project I'm working on. I'll see ya at school.
Player: ...?
*Ends Date*

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©2007-2009 ~OP-KingdomHearts-DS
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:

Author's Comments

for the game ---> [link]
Want to write? ---> [link]

These are Examples of written events. These are here to help give you an idea of how the writing is done. I included 3 different ones to give a varied style of writing and event type. I chose to show these because I felt they were very independent original ideas and stories. I hope you guys aim for that too!

Speaical thanks to :icongenisis34: :iconletselina: for writing such great stories and allowing me to share them here :D

Check them out, they are really cool people ^_^

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:iconblindsiderocks:
Aaah... YOU'RE MAKING ME MORE EXCITED FOR THIS!! :lmao:
(ajksgekjw Riku sounds like Luci XDD;; )

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::Yo-ho, haul together:Hoist the colors high:Heave ho:Theives and beggars:Never shall we die::
:iconkazekasai:
Interesting :)

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"Sanity is madness put to good uses."
George Santayana

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I changed my mind,
the last one was dirty
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
haha, dare I say what inspired my riku writing? Aside from my wonderful watches and their comments on riku's profile :D

So I'm guess I did a good job on the date? I'm really not sure at all >.< haven't had anyone read it yet.

I'm curious how luci and riku are alike haha.

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Operation - Kingdom - Hearts - Dating - Simulation

Brining you FF7 and KH dating goodness in English
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
Oh... yes... BE excited... become my pawn... uh.. I mean.. ah... loyal supporter... :evillaugh:

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Operation - Kingdom - Hearts - Dating - Simulation

Brining you FF7 and KH dating goodness in English
:iconblindsiderocks:
YES... I love it... every bit of it!! >w<;; *is a sucker for that kinda stuff*
Ooh.. their just quiet and easily embarrassed... well.. XD;; and emo to boot. (lol :B and silver/white hair)

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::Yo-ho, haul together:Hoist the colors high:Heave ho:Theives and beggars:Never shall we die::
:iconkeko16:
*squeel*

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Neko Neko Nya Nya

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ケリー

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"While all the other littel goths wanted to be vampires...I wanted to be a vampire's pet" - ME
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
XD I love the easily embarrassed type... maybe I'm just evil? muahaha!
and yes.... silver white hair... if only people ran around with hair like that o.O

I plan on writing at least one date for every guy. I can't help but write sappy stuff, so there will be more stuff to come :)

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Operation - Kingdom - Hearts - Dating - Simulation

Brining you FF7 and KH dating goodness in English
:icongenisis34:
aww no goodnite kiss? lolz jk this is gunna b so cool wen its finished!!!

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~You! Off my planet!
~Hugging rulez!! if u dont like hugging then screw u! :hug:
~Calling you an idiot would be an insult to stupid people

ღ♥Taylor♥ღ
:iconblindsiderocks:
=w=;;; if you're evil than I am too..
MMmmhm.. well, besides old people XD

Sappy stuff is awesome though *has recently started to really..really...*coughreally* like it*....:heart:

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::Yo-ho, haul together:Hoist the colors high:Heave ho:Theives and beggars:Never shall we die::

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