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This is the first meeting with Riku on the beach. If you want to enjoy the event for the first time with graphics and other coolness -- please wait till the update to see what happens. If you want to help with the writing please read the artist’s comment for instructions.



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OP-KH-DS

--Riku's Beach Meeting--

By: OP

Notes:
Riku is walking alongside the beach when he sees someone lying in the sand. Concerned he runs over to see if something’s wrong, but find’s that this person is alright. But Riku becomes quite overcome with curiosity with this new person he has never seen before.



=-=-=-Begin Event-=-=-=

Player: Mmmmm

Player: I feel asleep?

*Player sits up to find Riku in her face*

Riku: …

…

A. Can I get some of my personal space back?
B. Um… Hi?
C. (insert action)

======Section  A. Can I get some of my personal space back? ==========

Riku: Uh, yeah sorry…

Riku: :3

Riku: I didn’t scare you, did I?

1. As if…
2. Only because your face is :3
3. Uh… not really…



============Section B. Um… Hi? ===========================

Riku: Oh! Uh… yeah sorry.

Riku: …

Riku: *blush* Um….

1. … I gotta get going now.
2. What were you doing?
3. You know… you were awfully close even for a friendly hello <3
4. Um… What’s your name? ^_^;


--------------1. … I gotta get going now---------------------------------------------------


{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}



--------------2. What were you doing?-----------------------------------------------------


{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}






----------3. You know… you were awfully close even for a friendly hello <3----------

Riku: …Gak! (caught red handed) *blush*

Riku: That was nothing! I just tripped, that’s all! I was checking to see if you were alright! Okay! It was nothing like that!!

I. Oh~ like what? <3
II. You’re terribly cumbersome to trip in sand, aren’t you?
III. If you say so.


~~~~~~I. Oh~ like what? <3 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}

~~~~~~II. You’re terribly cumbersome to trip in sand, aren’t you?~~~~~~~


{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}

~~~~~~III. If you say so.~~~~~~~~~~~~~

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}




--------------4. Um… What’s your name? ^_^;----------------------------------------
Riku: It’s Riku. …I’ve never seen you before. You’re not from around here, are you?


I. Nope! I’m completely new to this place, and completely lost!
II. No, I’m rather relieved that you’re here. I’m a bit lost.
III. (can insert a 3rd option)


~~~~~I. Nope! I’m completely new to this place, and completely lost!~~~~~~~

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}

~~~~~II. No, I’m rather relieved that you’re here. I’m a bit lost.~~~~~~~~~~~

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}


~~~~~~~~~~~~~III. (can insert a 3rd option)~~~~~~~~~~~~~

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}







================C. *Insert Action*===================

(the player says something but then get cut off) (I can't think of what to write?! o3o;;;)


*Riku’s cell phone rings and begins talking to Sora*



{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}
©2009 ~OP-KingdomHearts-DS
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:

Author's Comments

I really want to work more on this before I posted but.. o,<

Anyhow even if you just have ideas that could get my creative juices flowing again that would be very helpful m(- -)m

Any questions, just ask :D


How can I help?

I wrote some of the main story frame, but the meat of the story not there. You can leave a comment and write how you think the different story tracks should continue. If you just have a simple idea but don't want to really write, just comment anyway. Maybe it'll inspire someone else to write the rest.

When you do please write down which Section, and under which option you are talking about. Otherwise we'll just be confused @_@

(Example: Section B, option 1, option II )


To make it simple for you guys I wrote these notes where the writing is needed:

{PLEASE CONTINUE STORY}
This is where I stopped writing but it needs to continue. At these spots you can create new sets of options or just add one more story. Whatever feels best. Eventually it'll come to an end with player going to school with or without Riku.



How do I read this thing??!

I tried to make this as clear cut as possible. I think if you just keep reading it will make sense.

The event is divided into 3 sections A, B, C. These are the first options that player can choose from. Each of these options branch out into more options. The option after the first one is always 1,2,3.

When you "select" an option, scroll down till you see that option named again.

Example

1. go this way...
2. go that way


---------1. go this way... -----------------

this will continue with what happens if you "go this way".

--------2. go that way-----------------

If you "go that way" this is what happens.




the problem comes if when there's lots of writing and more options. You just have to keep scrolling down till you find the option title that matches the option you selected.

Comments


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~hafunny Jun 3, 2009, 5:17:23 AM
I thought I'd add stuff for fun, though I don't know really how he'd react... ^^; And so I won't do much either~

B.1. "...I got to get going now"

Riku: ...So are you new here?...Where are you going?
~~~~
B.2. "What were you doing?"

Riku: Ah, *blushes and moves back* I haven't seen you before. My name's Riku, yours? *holds out hand*
~~~~
B.3.I. "Oh, like what? <3 "

Riku: *blush and stands* Li-like nothing. My name's Riku.... What exactly were you doing sleeping here? Someone could have stepped on you... -.-;
~~~
[link]. "Your terribly cumbersome to trip in sand, aren't you?"

Riku: *blush* Ya, whatever. *stands* I'm Riku. What's up with you anyways?
~~~
[link]. "If you say so."

Riku: *scratches back of head* Tch, ya well. *Stands* My names Riku. And you are?
~~~

B.4.I. "Nope! I’m completely new to this place, and completely lost!"

Riku: ^^; Ahh, is that so? Um... This is Destiny Islands.... How did you get here?

+. Don't know... ~.~
-. That's not any of your business... >.>
----
B.4.I.+.

Riku: Riiight... Well how about I show you around?
----
B.4.I.-.

Riku: Tch. Fine, you can look around yourself.

~~~~~
[link]. "No, I’m rather relieved that you’re here. I’m a bit lost."

Riku: *smiles* Ah, then how about I show you around?

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[link]. "Ahh! No, I'm sorry, I'm not... Could you please help me, Riku?"



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Kay, that's all I have time for, for now. Hope it's okay. ^^;

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~LaurenThorpexCloud Jun 3, 2009, 5:17:42 AM
section B 1.

Riku: really? sorry...say, where are you going?

you:
1. none of your business buddeh!
2. school of course
3. not actually sure at the moment...

===========none of your business buddeh===========

Riku: well forgive a guy for being curious. jeez!

1. oh my god! sorry!
2. well its true!
3. no worries, i forgive you ^_^

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The flower has withered
it withered even before it bloomed
it withered because of me
i killed the flower
:icondahila-mockery:
~Dahila-Mockery Jun 3, 2009, 12:17:34 PM
Looks like you guy don't need my help here.

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And attack when attacked
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"Fiction gives us a second chance that life denies us." Paul Theroux :library:
:iconkingdomheartsdragon:
~kingdomheartsdragon Jun 3, 2009, 2:36:24 PM
*HUGS RIKU TIGHTLY*

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WEEEEE!!! IM AN ANGEL!!! *dances around, eating candy*
if you hug me, you'll go to your haven!!! :hug:
IM JUST KIDDING!!! i am an angel, but if you touch meh, you DIE!!! :stab:
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~Rougethebat04 Jun 5, 2009, 7:15:09 PM
Hrm...I've been told I am a great Riku in roleplays...Give me a while and I'll come up with something you could work with...


*concentrates on written parts on screen* :paranoid:

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jon screamed at the top of lung!
_____________________________

"Tell your friends you shoot little girls for fun."
:iconrougethebat04:
~Rougethebat04 Jun 5, 2009, 7:22:27 PM
Actually...MY post might be mighty long... I can help you out through the whole thing but...Do you just want me to er...Post it in my page? Or drop a note?

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jon screamed at the top of lung!
_____________________________

"Tell your friends you shoot little girls for fun."
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
~OP-KingdomHearts-DS Jun 8, 2009, 7:13:56 AM
The more help the merrier :D I don't mind if it's long ^_^

You can post it on your page if you want, or you can even post it as a comment on here. Whichever you like :D

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~OP-KingdomHearts-DS Jun 8, 2009, 7:15:59 AM
I wouldn't say that, there's a lot of story to be filled out. Not to mention, even IF everything was taken care of, you could still add something in that might change the story for the better :D Ya never know :nod:

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:icondahila-mockery:
~Dahila-Mockery Jun 8, 2009, 1:37:35 PM
Oh.

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I hit back when hit
And attack when attacked
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"Fiction gives us a second chance that life denies us." Paul Theroux :library:
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