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This is the first meeting with Roxas on the beach. While there isn't much to spoil, if you want to enjoy the event for the first time with graphics and other coolness -- please wait till the update to see what happens. If you want to help with the writing please read the artist’s comment for instructions.



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--Roxas Beach Meeting--

By: OP

Notes:
The player gets hits by flying book bag and Roxas is the guilty part, but it was only an accident.


=-= Begin Event =-=

*BAM*

Roxas: Ah I’m so sorry.

*Roxas appears*

Roxas: Are you alright

1. Ow… what hit me?
2.  *Dies*
3. *Punch him*


-----------------3. *Punch him*------------

*BAM*

Roxas:
Man, what was that for?

I. Payback for hitting me!
II. *Cries*
III. Huh, where am I?


I. Payback for hitting me!

Roxas: HEY! I said I was sorry!! Can't you take an apology?!

i.) Whatever, I don't need guys like you.
ii.) I guess so, sorry about that...
iii) Apology doesn't cut it, but we're even now

---i.) Whatever, I don't need guys like you.---
Roxas: And I don't need someone violent like you! I'm outta here!

*ENDS*

---ii.) I guess so, sorry about that.---
Roxas: *sigh* it's fine... just don't go punching people before you know what's going on.
Player: What's that?
Roxas: Never mind, it's all in the past right? So let's get going to school.
Roxas: We're going the same way, we might as well go together
Roxas:... not that.. I mean.. *blush*
Roxas: Let's just go!
Player: Alright.

*ENDS*

---iii.Apology doesn't cut it, but we're even now)---
Roxas: Wha...?
Player: I said we're even. So it's fine.
Roxas: .... ah... whatever. I don't know about you but I'm going to school.

a.) See you later then.
b.) Hey let's go together?

--a.) See you later then.--
Roxas: Uh... yeah sure...
*ENDS*

--b.) Hey let's go together?--
Roxas: Um... I guess... I can't stop you. Just don't hit me again.
*ENDS*

============II. *Cries*===============

Player: *cries*
Roxas: It didn’t hurt that much did it?

1) N-no... *wipe eyes*
2) Ow, That really hurt.
3) *Bursts out laughing*



1)N-no... *wipe eyes*
Roxas: I'm really sorry, okay? You need any help?
Player: it’s okay, just be more careful next time.
Roxas: *blushing a little* I guess I'll be seeing you around then?
Player: Yeah, probably.
Roxas: okay …well, see ya around then.

*END*


2)Ow. That really hurt.

Roxas: oh, I’m really sorry! Do you want me to walk you to the nurse?

i. Actually, that’d be nice.
ii. No thanks, I think I can manage.

i-
Player: Um, my name’s -insert player name-, what’s yours?
Roxas: Oh, name’s Roxas *smiles*
Roxas: Well ______, I prmoise to get you to the nurse safe and sound. Let's get going :)

*END*


ii-
Roxas: If you’re sure… By the way, my name’s Roxas *smiles*
Player: that’s cool. Mine’s -insert player name-
Roxas: Well um... I guess I'll see ya around. Maybe we can hang out sometime.

*END*


3) *Bursts out laughing*
Player: HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!! XD
Roxas: Wh-what?! What are you trying to pull here?!
Player: ... Oh... Nothing <3
Roxas: ARGH! FORGET IT!! You're more pyschoatic than Axel! *Roxas Leaves*
Player: hehehehe X3

*END*






===========III. Huh, where am I?================

Roxas: Don’t give me that!

1) Don't give you what?
2) You're seriously going to flip out on a girl with amnesia?
3)...Y'know, from this angle, you're really sorta cute...

1) Don't give you what?
Roxas: ...Because you definitely forgot what happened 5 seconds ago...

i) What did happen 5 seconds ago?
ii) Yep. Remind me, please.
iii) *blush, look down*

---i) What did happen 5 seconds ago?----
{PLEASE END STORY}
---ii) Yep. Remind me, please.---
{PLEASE END STORY}
---iii) *blush, look down*---
{PLEASE END STORY}

2) You're seriously going to flip out on a girl with amnesia?
Roxas: Me flip out? You're the one who punched me!

i) Oh yeah...
ii) You should have watched where you were chucking your stuff!
iii) I... I know... I guess I overreacted a little, I'm really sorry.

---i) Oh yeah...-----
{PLEASE END STORY}
---ii) You should have watched where you were chucking your stuff!---
{PLEASE END STORY}
---iii) I... I know... I guess I overreacted a little, I'm really sorry.---
{PLEASE END STORY}


3)...Y'know, from this angle, you're really sorta cute...
Roxas: W-what?! *Mad blushing*

i) Yeah! I always dig boys with icy blue eyes
ii) Heh, you thought I meant that >XD
iii) Eeeep! Did I say that out loud? I'm sorry... >_>

---i) Yeah! I always dig boys with icy blue eyes---
{PLEASE END STORY}
---ii) Heh, you thought I meant that >XD---
{PLEASE END STORY}
---iii) Eeeep! Did I say that out loud? I'm sorry... >_>---
{PLEASE END STORY}
Thank you everyone for the help! I've made some edits with the help of
:icontaurosgrl::iconmiripet97:

There's still some a little more that needs to be added to finish it. Also if you have any idea of how to make it better, don't be shy to comment :)



I completely finished the section A and B for the first two choices so I left them out intentionall, the 3rd option "C" is where I need the help.

I left notes in the script to show you where I still need help.

{PLEASE END THE STORY}
Means the story is already at options i, ii, and iii. I try to end the story at this point (to make it not too long). So at these places, just wrap it up to where the player ends up going to school ( with or without Axel depending on the circumstances)







How do I read this thing??!

I tried to make this as clear cut as possible. I think if you just keep reading it will make sense.

The event is divided into 3 sections A, B, C. These are the first options that player can choose from. Each of these options branch out into more options. The option after the first one is always 1,2,3. Then I, II, III, and so on...

When you "select" an option, scroll down till you see that option named again.

Example

1. go this way...
2. go that way


---------1. go this way... -----------------

this will continue with what happens if you "go this way".

--------2. go that way-----------------

If you "go that way" this is what happens.
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---------A. Ow...what hit me?---------------
Roxas: That was my book bag...i'm sorry, it just flew out of my hand.

Player: 1. That's ok, it was an accident...*holds head*
2. HEY!!
3. Owach! *holds head*

---------1. That's ok, it was an accident...*holds head*-----------------
Roxas: Gee, I guess I hit you pretty hard... *gently takes your hand off your head*
Player: *blushes slightly*
Roxas: Looks like it may need some ice. Want me to take you to the school nurse?
Player: I. That would be nice, actually.
II. I guess so...
III. N-no, I think i'm ok... *blushes more*
---------I. That would be nice, actually.-----------------
Roxas: Ok, let's head on then. By the way, my name's Roxas
Player: Nice to meet you. I'm *name*
END
---------II. I guess so...---------------
*same reply*
---------III. N-no, i think I'm ok...*blushes more*---------------
Roxas: You sure? Ok, i guess.
Roxas: Hey, wait, why's your face all red?
Player: What? My face isn't red. >.<
Roxas: Yes it is.
Player: uh, um...i gotta go. *dashes off*
Roxas: Wait! *is alone* didn't even catch her name...
END

---------2. HEY!---------------
Roxas: Woah, woah! I said I was sorry! >.<
Player: I. Oops, guess I didn't hear you...
II. Well, watch where your book bag is flying! *starts to stomp off*
III. Well, that's what you get.
---------I. Oops, guess I didn't hear you...---------------
Roxas: Heh, that's ok.
Player: No, no it's not ok! I shouldn't have yelled.
Roxas: It's fine, really...*looks in other direction*
Player: *looks down* ...
Roxas: ...
Player: I-I guess I better head on to class... I'll see you later I guess...
Roxas: sure...
END
---------II. Well, you should watch where your book bag is flying! *starts to stomp off*---------------
Roxas: Wait! *is alone*
Roxas: *sigh* I know i'm a Nobody, so why do I feel guilty?
END
---------III. Well, that's what you get.-----------------
Roxas: Heh, I guess that's true. *smiles slightly* gotta trade a wrong for a wrong, right?
Player: Now you're just confusing me.
Roxas: ...
Player: ...
Roxas: Well, i guess we better head to class. See ya later, i guess
Player: Bye...*walks away*
END

---------3. Owach! *holds head*---------------
*script from one*