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Have an idea for the dating game but don't think you can write out a story? Got a crazy idea what one of the guys should do but not sure how to finish it? Wanna help out but you're not much of a writer?

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:iconc2ii:
How about a halloween dance

Kairi suggested herself to be a princess (lol)
Sora self proclaim himself King (-_- play KH2 and you'll get it)
Riku gets to be prince....

riku:so Sora...
____:wait a minute doesn't the prince go with the princess?
riku:thats what we said and when Sora got it he wouldn't stop asking to be the prince
____: (....retarded)
riku:but Kairi said we both get to be prince though I prefer to be king myself
____:

a. Then I get to be Queen
b. ...
c. Hehe I wonder who your queen is

a. Riku : heh Probably
b. ... Eh? whats wrong
c. I already know...

(some random stuff here can't help with the sokai sorry -_-)

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Support yaoi? Get the hell out of my face and take your germs with you D:<
:iconc2ii:
Errr....maybe I should make a sora one too

Sora: Oh hey ____ Did you hear about the Halloween dance?

___:
a. yup sure did
b. no not really

choose b. he explains the halloween dance

a.Sora: So your coming right?
____:
1. Of course
2. I don't care
3.I can't

1.Sora: Cool I'll see you there, I'll be the one with the king I mean prince
costume
2.Sora: Why not?....Don't be shy (smiles and will drag you to the party -_-)
3.Sora: Oh.... too bad well later (goes away)

I know I'm not creative so something here and help expand this idea -_-

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:iconlaurenthorpexcloud:
i dunno...fireworks night.

Cloud: they're quite bright...
____: a. yeah.
b. ...
c. i feel weird...
answer one: they kinda hurt my eyes.
two: okaaay.
three: i hope you don't feel too bad. >_<
Cloud: you okay?
____: a. they're pretty...
b. ...
c. I feel kinda...
one: i guess they are...
two: ???
three: *puts arm around to steady you*
Cloud: Do you feel like sitting down here?
____: a. Sure, why not!
b. do i have to.
c. yeah...
one: *laughs*
two: you don't have to...*angry*
three: are you sure you're okay?
Cloud: it's weird, i wasn't going to come tonight.*looks down*
_____: a. are you glad you came now?
b. I wish you didn't!
c. zzzzzz
one: i guess so.
two: well fine! *Stomps off*
three: *puts and on head* She's got a fever...*takes you to your house.*
how was that?

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The flower has withered
it withered even before it bloomed
it withered because of me
i killed the flower
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
I think a fireworks date event would be really nice :D I like so far ^_^

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:iconlaurenthorpexcloud:
thanx

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The flower has withered
it withered even before it bloomed
it withered because of me
i killed the flower
:iconkelpiehunterkai:
I think that halloweeen dance mentioned above would be sooooo freakin cute!!

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:iconc2ii:
yeah and we could desigh outfits for them (sora can't where the halloween town costume cause I don't know it looks weird XD) and Vincent might not even come but in a event we can get him or bring him (and he'll be a vampire perfect!!)

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:iconorganization-hearts:
Scene: Girl is sitting on the beach staring into the ocean. Roxas walks by and she catches his eye so he walks back a few steps.

Roxas: Hey aren’t you the new girl what are you doing here?

[Girl]
1. I don’t know but on my way to school everyday the ocean always catches my eye with it’s beauty and all. ( Positive )

2. School bites I just wanna sit here and watch the ocean than attend your lame school ( Negative )

3. Because I can. ( Neutral )

Roxas:
Response to 1
- Oh wow that’s...that’s sounds pretty (Calm, happy expression)

Response to 2
- Fine I’ll easily be glad and leave your ugly face (Mad expression)

Response to 3
-..... (WTF expression)

*Roxas checks watch {watch says 8:57}*

Roxas: Oh crud we’re going to be late wanna walk with mean scratch that run with me?

[Girl]

1. Oh sure.... ( Positive )

2. Nah I’ll catch up later ( Negative )

3. Sure can I jump on your back? ( Neutral )
Roxas:

Response to 1
- Kay lets go (^_^ expression)

Response to 2
-O-kay suit yourself ( I don’t care expression )

Response to 3
- Uhh sure wait what???? ( OMGWTF expression )

[Girl]

Reponse to Roxas’s response # 1
- Yah *gets up and starts walking

Response to Roxas’s response # 2
-*looks away {Roxas leaves}*

Reponse to Roxas’s response # 3
- Yay *gets on (the girl is really heavy so Roxas is struggling)*


End scene pictures:

# 1 from choices above
- *Holds pinkies [you can see their backs] running to school*

# 2 from choices above
-* Girl sitting down looking out at ocean [the view of her is on her side] Roxas’s back is showing as he runs to school*

# 3 from choices above
- *Girl on back [Roxas struggling] backs are showing as Roxas limps to school and Girl enjoys the ride as if she were on a pony and she was 3

END

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KH3 comes in the future so depression is what comes of me
:iconop-kingdomhearts-ds:
Oi oi, homework I must do, but I'll give you a quick-ish reply. This doesn't suck at all :D I really like the player's responses to the guy.

There are some problems, but it isn't your writing. But that fact it conflicts with the game (or what I can do). The girl is asleep in the beginning (just like KH1) so she has to be asleep first (easily fixed, no?). There won't be artwork at the end of the beach scene (there will be later on in the game).

The piggy back is cute, but for the begging of the game I think it's too much. They just met, after all, and Roxas doesn't strike me the type to give random piggy back rides. So if you really like the piggy back idea, try to use it for a date event instead.

I think this piece has some really good writing in it. I'd like to see how others can elaborate on it, or maybe you can muster up even more for this.

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Operation - Kingdom - Hearts - Dating - Simulation

Brining you FF7 and KH dating goodness in English
:iconorganization-hearts:
you can do as u pls to it but the ending artwork is like wen the freeze the scene so its like artwork and i didnt make her asleep because its knda uhm.... weird that the girl is constantly asleep on the beach so yah

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