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[EDIT June 20 2009]

I add your suggestions and thoughts to the list :heart:
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These are just list of ideas, most of these have not been written out. Later on I'll add in what has been done.

So exercise those fingers and start writing! If you have any questions about stuff, please ask me about them :D

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Okay I read/skim through the comments in the Writing corner and I have to say I'm impressed -w- you guys have a lot of great ideas!! So based on the ideas given we'll make some events for all the different guys.

I think I have a complete list of everything we’ll see in the game, unless someone has something to add ^_^;

Eventually I'll make this the official writers page or some dorky jazz like that XD
Please make comments and read the comments of others to get ideas from each other!






NOTE: forget about the negative positive stuff. Just alternative paths that are funny, romantic, lead to cute stuff, or whatever. There will be a point given, but I’ll figure that part out myself :)



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:jsenn: WRITERS




This will be the list of Writing Events for the Game. I'll add and subtract as needed :3


Please make suggestions and give your own ideas for events!

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Beginning Stages
The guys are acquainted with you but don’t know you very well.
There might be hints of crushes at this point, or guys will be a little cold…


:jsenn: Beach Meeting

Meeting one of the guys at the beach before going off to school
These have been written or I’ll be finishing them up -3-

:jsenn: Orentation
You only meet one guy on the beach, but the rest of them you'll meet at orientation. Late for your first day can you get out of trouble and still impress the guys with good first impressions


:jsenn: Rainy Day
Half the guys forget their umbrellas you can decide who to share umbrella with or the opposite choose that you forgot your umbrella and the other guys the have one can share with you


:jsenn: Detention
You some how caused enough rucus for the teachers to give you detention. Would you be able to relate and build up a relationship with one of the daily detention club members?(probably someone like Axel but decrease relation with someone like Sephiroth...)


:jsenn: Struggle Game/School Nurse
You get to play a game of struggle or cheer on the guys. Less athletic guys might end up at the nurses, or perhaps if you lose you'll end up at the nurse's office.

:jsenn: Secret Admirer (Thanks to :iconyyi:)
You get a love letter in your locker! But who is it from!? You ask one of the girls for advice (kairi, namine, or aerith) and she suggests investigating. Thus you sneakily interrogate a few boys to see if he likes you! Or do some “tests” :3
You never really find out who wrote the love letter. But if you ask the right questions some of the guys seem like they are hiding something. Very suspicious!


:jsenn: Home Economics
You made cookies :evillaugh: in Home Ec. (or cupcakes, or whatever) and decide to give them to one of the guys! First you have to convince him to eat them (some of the guys are much harder to convince, some you wouldn’t have to ask XD) and there’s a possibility that he’ll be touched by your kindness you gave -him- your sweets. But before you have a chance at a romantic moment another cute guy comes up and askes for some sweets D: What will you do? Is he too sweet you can turn him down >,< ? Or will you risk embarrassesment by saying these cookies are only for him?

:jsenn: Cram time- its the midterms/finals and oh crap. are you the a student that tutors the guy or is the guy tutoring you?


Mid Stages
The guys are familiar with you, and might even be your good friend



:jsenn: out of buisness
the ice cream store is going out of buisness due to competion, and this store just happens to be sora/roxas/axel/riku/kairi/whatever 's favorite place. Lets work hard to advirstise the store and if successful, the ice cream store isn't going anywhere.


:jsenn: Boat Field Trip (Thanks to :iconnaticoisaninja:)
Since you’re on an island and all, for the science class you’re all required to take a field trip on a boat to watch the water life. But you manage to go overboard into the ocean.

Might include a fishing event with some of the guys.

While on the field trip you and the girls happen upon the paopu fruit tree and they explain it's mysterious legend. You and the girls decide to get some for the possible special someone later on.


:jsenn: Flower Event
A tradition at the HighWind High during this season is to give flowers to the girl. The color of the flowers have significance


:jsenn: Slumber Party
Kairi, Namine, Selphie, Olette (what ever other girls add them in there) and Aerith gets together every once a month. Increse friendship to get invited and who knows in the chit-chat you might learn something new... (*cough how much the guys like you so far what each guys like and certain past plus rumors that can be true or not...)

:jsenn: Special Event
It might happen at school or something like a date, it’ll reveal a little something about the guy.
I might have these already submitted (haven’t doubled checked), but I’ll accept more ideas

:jsenn: Sick Event
My sister came up with the idea that the guys get sick and you get to choose who you visit and give them a gift! I added that it was food poison from the meatball tacos (which is way so many people got sick at once!). So you get to see them in their PJs XD The gifts would be the same for everyone. Like you could give flowers, medicine, getwell card, etc. Sora would like the flowers, but might not be as impressed with medicine. Whereas medicine would be appreciated by Sephiroth and flowers would raise an eyebrow.

:jsenn:Lost and Found
He lost something very important to him. in the end you can either find it for him and help him get past this and move on. (something like sora lost his lucky charm, if you found it is good but if you don't find it and help him past this problem emotionally then 'sora' may get over that his chances with kairi already past or something like that....but i like the pairing sora and kairi but just a suggestion)


Last Stages
The guys and you know each other well, and might be more than just friends



:jsenn: Theatrical School Play Event
It’s getting close to the end of the year and it’s time for the annual school play! The class always get to vote on which play they’ll do. Oddly enough the play you vote for gets the most votes and somehow you get cast for the leading lady?! Regardless to any protest given you are forced into the part. And depending on which play you pick depends on who you’ll co-star with (example if you pick Sleeping Beauty Vincent will be the co-star).

During the play:
Not exactly a normal play, you can make choices that’ll effect the ending and direction of the play. The rest of the cast will just have to go along with it. You could end up with a prefect play, a very funny comedy, or perhaps something more dramatic.

Behind the Curtains:

After the play the guy will tell his thoughts about the play or the roles in the play. Maybe he’ll think it’s absurd or perhaps he relates to his role.


Plays

Character - Title - Part

Sora - Peter Pan (Peter)
Sora - Kingdom Hearts (Sora) (this is a special event)
Vicent - Sleeping Beauty (Beauty)
Axel - Howl's Moving Castle (Howl)
Sephiroth - Little Bunny FooFoo (Bunny)
Roxas - Nightmare Christmas (Jack) or Hercules (Hercules)??
Cloud - Little Mermaid (Prince Eric) ??
Riku - Little Red Riding Hood (Wolf)

If you have a better idea than what's here, please share that too!

I don't mind if the plays don't have any alternate paths, but I think it would be more fun if there was.





:jsenn: Halloween Party


Halloween Dance:

One suggestion given was Roxas and Axel prepping the rock band that will be playing during the party. I'd imagine some cute events with getting certain people to dance :3

Fortune Telling:
You go to one of the attractions at the Halloween party: The fortune Teller. So you ask her about the guys at your school to see what they think about you!

Haunted House:
Before the Halloween party started you were invited to go Axel and crew on an adventure not exactly permitted by the teachers. Cloud, Roxas, Riku, Sora, Aerith, Namine, and you are lead by Axel into the “haunted” Shinra Mansion. What horrid things await? It’s a good thing there are many guys there to protect you :3 Or will you impress them with your courage?

After:
Vincent and Sephiroth never went to the Shinra mansion? So what events await them? Sephiroth event was already written (check my gallery for the fanfic "little black box"). After Being separate from the group you find yourself with Vincent. You can ask him to help you find the group, thus going back into that creepy masnsion. Or stay there with him and see what happens. Remember Vincent and the player know each other well so you can be more romantic -3-




:jsenn: Special Event
This is an event that specifically for a guy character; a special moment between you and one of the guys. This event will happen at a place that’s significant to the guy, and he’ll reveal more about himself, his past, or his future dreams.

Perhaps there’ll be a near confess of love at this point? >w<

Riku – the caves
Riku talks about his desire to explore the world when the one he hold closest.

Axel – (???)

Vincent – Shinra Mansion (???)

Sephiroth – on the cliff near HallowBastion/Radient Gerden (?)

Roxas – Tower in Twilight Town

Sora – the caves

Cloud – Aerith’s Church (note: if you’re going to write about this one note me first! There’s some details you need to know first!!)



:jsenn:make a wish (near the end)- the guy you like brings you out telling you its a secret. you talk abit then watch shooting stars and you are told to make a wish. i wonder what he wished for.



:jsenn: Paopu Fruit

A moment will come when one of the girls give you a paopu fruit. So you ask the a guy to meet you at the beach because there’s something you want to tell him. But the player must choose the time wisely otherwise she’ll be rejected.

Way too soon:
Who’s going where with you? Not him! You end up being flatly rejected, before you get a chance to offer the paopu fruit.

Too soon:
If try to give the paopu fruit too soon when he knows you a little you’ll go to the place but the guy will run away, act like he has no idea, panic, or something else. Thus the offer is a failure. It doesn’t mean Game Over, but it doesn’t help either.

Right Time:

If you have enough points, the guy will accept the poapu fruit thus confessing your love for him! and there’ll be some romantic exchanges

I think it would be cool if you could choose what you say during this confession :D


Bonus:

If you have a LOT of points (near max or maxed out) then the guy will actually confess to you first (if it’s Riku, Roxas, or Sora they’ll offer the paopu fruit before you do) and tell you of his love for you. .
















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Nevermoremist's avatar
Have you ever thought of the scenario where the Player thinks they're alone and is singing songs from KH&KH2 or FF and one of the boys hears? It could be a meet scene or a regular scene that sparks a conversation. Also is there going to be any way to meet Leon(Squall) or Tidus? (Yes I know they ain't in 7 but they're in KH) Also (I know they aren't in any KH ds, psp, ps2/3 but still) is there any way to work in Snow Villars or Noel Krietz (dunno how to spell his last name lol). Both are in FFXIII-2 as well as Lightning Awakening. The creators finally caved and gave numerous fangirls what they wanted another scene where Snow has no shirt lol.....too bad Light had to beat the sh!t out of him for turning into a Cieth but a girl's gotta do what a girl's gotta do to save a friend/future brother-in-law. Sorry for rsmbling but my alrady low filter flies out the window when I get tired and it's nearly 4am where I'm at lol bye for now and I'm probably gonna be cussin at myself later for rambling lol srry I really am stopping now bye. =)